Marathi Online Novel - Ad-Bhut CH 53 अश्रूचे दोन टपोरे थेंब (समाप्त)

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आता थोड्याच वेळात ऍंथोनीला डेथ चेंबरमध्ये इलेक्ट्रीकच्या चेअरवर बसवून देहांताची शिक्षा देण्यात येणार होती. डिटेक्टीव सॅम, शिक्षा देणारा अधिकारी, एक डॉक्टर आणि अजून एकदोन ऑफिसर्स डेथ चेंबरच्या समोर उभे होते. तेवढ्यात दोन पोलिस अधिकारी बेड्या घातलेल्या अवस्थेत ऍंथोनीला तिथे घेवून आले. देहांताची शिक्षा देण्याची मुख्य जबाबदारी असलेल्या अधिकाऱ्याने आपल्या घड्याळाकडे बघितले आणि पोलिस अधिकाऱ्यांना खुनावले. पोलिस अधिकाऱ्यांनी ऍंथोनीला इलेक्ट्रीक चेअरकडे नेले.

'' ऑपेरटर कुठे आहे '' त्यातल्या एका अधिकाऱ्याने विचारले.

एक माणूस लगबगीने समोर आला. आणि इलेक्ट्रीक चेअर ऑपरेट करण्याच्या पॅनलजवळ गेला.

ज्या पोलिसांनी ऍंथोनीला इलेक्ट्रीक चेअरजवळ नेले होते त्यांनी त्याला आता त्या खुर्चीवर बसविले. काळ्या कापडाने त्याचा चेहरा झाकण्यात आला. मग ते पोलिस इलेक्ट्रीक चेअर चेंबरमधून बाहेर आले आणि त्यांनी चेंबर बंद करुन घेतले.

मुख्य अधिकाऱ्याने पॅनलजवळ उभ्या असलेल्या ऑपरेटरकडे बघितले. ऑपरेटर एकदम तयार असल्याच्या पावित्र्यात त्या पॅनलजवळ उभा होता. पुन्हा तो अधिकारी घड्याळाकडे पाहू लागला. कदाचीत त्याची उलटी गीणती सुरु असावी.

जरी त्या लोकांना हे नेहमीचं असलं तरी वातावरणात नाही म्हटलं तरी थोडा तणाव दिसायला लागला.

अचानक त्या अधिकाऱ्याने ऑपरेटरला इशारा केला.

ऑपरेटरने एका क्षणाचाही विलंब न लावता इलेक्ट्रीक चेअर पॅनलवरचे एक लाल बटन दाबले.

थोड्या वेळाने ऑपरेटरने 'काम तमाम झालं' या पावित्र्यात त्या अधिकाऱ्याकडे बघितलं.

'' डॉक्टर '' त्या अधिकाऱ्याने डॉक्टरच्या नावाचा पुकारा केला.

डॉक्टर लगबगीने इलेक्ट्रीक चेअर चेंबरजवळ गेला, चेंबर उघडलं आणि आत गेला.

'' सर ही इज डेड'' आतूनच डॉक्टरचा आवाज आला.

तो अधिकारी गर्रकन वळला आणि ती जागा सोडून चालता झाला. तो ऑपरेटर तिथेच बाजुला असलेल्या एका खोलीत गेला. तिथे बाजुलाच उभा असलेला एक स्टाफ मेंबर त्या चेंबरमध्ये, कदाचित चेंबर साफ करण्यासाठी शिरला. सगळं कसं एखाद्या कवायतीप्रमाणे सुरु होतं. त्या सगळ्यांना जरी ते नेहमीचंच असलं तरी  सॅमसाठी काही तो नेहमी पार पडणारा सोहळा नव्हता. तो अजुनही तिथेच उभा राहून एक एक सोपस्कार न्याहाळून पाहत होता.

आता डॉक्टरही तिथून निघून गेला होता.

आता फक्त तिथे सॅम एकटाच उरला होता. तो अजुनही तिथे स्तब्ध उभा होता, त्याच्या डोक्यात कदाचित वेगळेच विचार सुरु असावेत.

अचानक कुणीतरी लगबगीने त्याच्या पाठीमागुन तिथे आला.

'' अच्छा झालं वाटते'' मागुन आवाज आला.

सॅमने वळून मागे पाहाले आणि सॅमला आश्चर्याचा धक्काच बसला. ऑपरेटर त्याच्या समोर उभा होता.

हा तर आत्ताच पॅनल ऑपरेट करुन त्या बाजुच्या खोलीत शिरला होता...

मग आत्ताच्या आत्ता हा इकडून कुठून आला...

'' मला काळजी होती की माझ्या अनुपस्थीतीत सगळं कस काय पार पडेल... '' तो ऑपरेटर म्हणाला.

'' बाय द वे कुणी ऑपरेट केलं पॅनल'' त्या ऑपरेटरने सॅमला विचारले.

सॅमला एकावर एक आश्चर्याचे धक्के बसत होते.

सॅमने बाजुच्या खोलीकडे बघितले.

'' कुणी ऑपरेट केला म्हणजे?... तुच तर ऑपरेट केला'' सॅम अविश्वासाने म्हणाला.

'' काय गोष्टी करता... मी तर हा आता इथे आलो..'' त्या ऑपरेटरने म्हटले.

सॅमने पुन्हा गोंधळून त्याच्याकडे आणि मग त्या बाजुच्या रुमकडे बघितले ज्यात तो मघा गेला होता.

'' ये माझ्या सोबत ये'' सॅम त्याला त्या बाजुच्या खोलीकडे घेवून गेला.

सॅमने त्या खोलीचं दार ढकललं. दार आतून बंद होतं. त्याने दारावर नॉक केलं. आतून काहीच प्रतिसाद नव्हता. सॅमने आता ते दार जोर जोराने बडविण्यास सुरवात केली. तरीही आतून काहीच प्रतिक्रिया नव्हती. सॅम आपल्या पुर्ण ताकदीनिशी त्या दाराला ढकलायला लागला. तो गोंधळलेला ऑपरेटरही आता त्याला ढकलण्यास मदत करु लागला.

जोर जोराने ढकलून आणि धक्के देवून शेवटी सॅमने आणि त्या ऑपरेटरने ते दार तोडले.

दार तुटताच सॅम आणि तो ऑपरेटर लगबगीने खोलीत शिरले. त्यांनी खोलीत चौफेर आपली नजर फिरवली. खोलीत कुणीच नव्हतं. त्यांनी एकमेकांकडे बघितलं. त्या ऑपरेटरच्या चेहऱ्यावर गोंधळलेले भाव होते तर सॅमच्या चेहऱ्यावर अगम्य असे भितीदायक भाव उमटले होते.

अचानक वरुन काहीतरी खाली पडलं. दोघांनी दचकुन बघितलं. ती एक काळी मांजर होती, जिने वरुन उडी मारली होती. ती मांजर आता सॅमच्या अगदी समोर उभी राहाली आणि एकटक सॅमकडे पहायला लागली. अचानक ते आश्चर्याने तोंड वासून त्या मांजरीकडे पाहू लागले. हळू हळू त्या काळ्या मांजराचं रुपांतर नॅन्सीच्या सडलेल्या मृतदेहात होवू लागलं. त्या ऑपरेटरचे तर हातपाय लट लट कापत होते. सॅमही थीजल्यागत, पुतळ्यासारखा स्थिर जे त्याच्यासमोर घडत होतं ते पाहत होता. हळू हळू त्या सडलेल्या मृतदेहाचं रुपांतर एका सुंदर अशा तरुण स्त्रीमध्ये झालं. हो, ती नॅन्सीच होती. आता तिच्या चेहऱ्यावर एक समाधान दिसत होतं. बघता बघता तिच्या डोळ्यांतून दोन मोठे टपोरे अश्रू घरंगळून तिच्या गालावर आले आणि हळू हळू ती तिथून अदृष्य होवून नाहीशी झाली.


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420 comments:

  1. Khupach Chan. Tumhi parvangi dili tar ek suggestion hota "Ti manjari khun kashi karaychi he jar sangitala asta tar ajun thriller vatla asta". Tari sudha khup chan. Ata pudchychi vat pahatoy.

    Madhu (mad_hu)

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  2. Very very interesting novel..
    Eagarly waiting for Sunil's next novel.

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  3. Hi Sunil,

    Katha farach chaan hoti...eka cinema chi story pan hou shakel.

    Mukhya mhanje mala aadhichya kathe-peksha (Shoonya) sheval jaast aawadala.

    Lihine thambau naka.

    Khup Khup Shubhecha

    Pudhil kathechi waat pahato ahe.

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  4. khup sunder lihile aahe tumhi.

    keep it up.

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  5. far chhan aahe ashich suspence aajun ek suru kara
    thanks..............

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  6. katha ekdam chan aahe, mi aataparyant anek katha vaachlya pan he kadambari mala khup aawadali ashach katha punha liha

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  7. Desperately waiting for your new suspence novel. Sunil, request you to get the new one as earliest.
    regards,

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  8. Hi Sunil,

    Eagerly waiting for your new novel. Pls publish your new suspence novel as earliest.
    Best regards...

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  9. Dear Sunilji,

    Tumchya donhi kadambarya wachlya. Donhi phar phar avadlya. Divsachi survat tumchya kadambarichya chapter ne vhaychi. Pudhil kadambarichi vaat pahat aahe.

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  10. far interesting novel hota.
    Keep it up.
    Wish you all the best for next novel.

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  11. Dear Sunil,
    Novel was too good. Shunya was also very interesting. Waiting for your next novel.

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  12. Atishi sundar katha. Atach katha pahili ani start to end vachali. Tahan bhuk visrun. Sunil tumhi atishay sunder katha lihili aatet. Pratyek patra agdi dolyasamor ubhe rahte. End atishai vegla, chhanch.
    Mi ya pudhehi tumchya katha nakki vachin asach interest gheun. ALL THE BEST.

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  13. Shunya n Ad-bhut kathechi chapters upload zali ki lagech wachun mokla zalo... Aata next novelchi waat pahtoy. Please lovekar navin novel upload kara ho, Sunildada.. :)

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  14. khoop mast aahe.keep it up....

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  15. Bhannat ahe hi kadambari ekdum !

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  16. Khupach chan.

    very very nice

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  17. NOVEL KHUP CHHAN AAHE. ATISHAY SUNDER PADHATINE TASECH UTKANTHA VADHAT JANARI KATHA AAHE.

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  18. novel is damn good

    Vinod Vaidya

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  19. Khupach chaan!!!

    Katha vachtana ek ek prasang agdi dolya samor yayche....nice story ...liked it very much....please continue writing.....

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  20. Very nice. very good.

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  21. Khoop chan hote novel..........fakt nave jar apli marathi asti na tar agadich mast vatle aste........pan tarihi apratim.....ajun dusrya novel chi vat baghto ahoth.............

    Radhika

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  22. khup khup chhan aahe novel ....pan nav aapali havi hoti..really great work

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  23. Khup chan ladambari aahe....nav shakya zhalyas marathi theva....ujval bavishya baddal shubheccha.....

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  24. Khupach Chaan aahe. Mala Suspense thriller vachayala avadate thyamule khup aawadali.

    Black Hole vachayala ghetali aahe ti sudha surekha aahe. Pudhe kai hoil yachi utsukata lagun aahe.

    Regards
    Lekhini.

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  25. khum ustuktha aahe pudhe kay honar??? asch lihit raha,
    shkya aslas marathith naav liha khup aaplepana vatato

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  26. Khoop Chan Aahe

    Very Good.............

    Sachn

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  27. excellent khupach chhan

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  28. Very interesting Story, i hardly read novells but this was mind blowing.

    Keep up the good Writing.

    Thanks

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  29. its wonderful..
    ekdam Zakaassssssssss..!!!

    pudhachi novel kadhi yeill
    yachi vat pahin..

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  30. it was realy a very nice story i realy liked it
    just awsome

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  31. Very Touchy One...........

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  32. too good. khupch chan. agadi survati pasun shevat paryanta. its too good.

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  33. HI, SUNIL
    kahrach apratim ahe katha me vachayala ghettli te purn hoipren uthloch nahi...but 1 req hoti jar hey pan sangitall ast ki tila tyani marlyawar tichya bodych kay kell tar ankhi chan hott anyway baki tumachi katha akhadya cinemala hitt banau shakkel ...
    thnxx

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  34. Extermaly great! Net var ase kahi novel asatat he mala mahit navhate Pan Ata khup chhan vatate ahe & marathicha abhimanhi. Ek motha khajina gavasalyacha anand hotoy. Keep writing. Wish you very best luck to fill us with great joy of reading.

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  35. Hi,

    waw amazing......mastcha...ekada suru kelyavar sampeparynat uthavsacha vatala nahi....

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  36. आवडली. उत्कंठा सतत वाढत जाणारी आहे. कादंबरी लेखन जमायला लागले आहे.

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  37. Great Stroy...
    Pan hyamadhye bhoota peksha kahi tari manvi technogy cha wapar kela asata tar bar watal asata....
    Tari hi mast hoti...... :)

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  38. Terrific. When when I feel its ending something new comes in front but end is unbelievable.

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  39. Khupach chan. shewat paryant utsukta wadhate ki aata pudhe kyay? pan over all katha farach chann aahe. tasesch Black hole hi chann aahe. Pudhi kadambari chi far utsuktene wat pahat aahe. Pudhil kathe sathi shubhecha.

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  40. Your this story was very nice and interesting I liked it very much.
    Now waiting for true story novel please write some true stories.
    All the Best for next stories.

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  41. khupach chan,
    Hi katha vachun vel kasa gela kalalech nahi.
    ashyach katha lihit ja .I am waiting for next Novels............
    Thanks.......

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  42. chan,mala he novel khup avadle.Wish u all the best for future.

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  43. Surekh kadambari aahe. 'Bhaan harpun vaachane' me khoop divasani anubhavale. rahasyamay kathecha etka chhaan aanand dilya baddal dhanyavaad.

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  44. very good, excellent novel.
    navyachi wat pahat ahe

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  45. soled hoti story, khupach chhan, agdi shabdch nahiyet bolayala.

    Ashach chhan chhan liha, tya sathi good wishes.

    keep it up.

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  46. katha aawadali. shewat chhan hota

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  47. Khupach chaan hoti story,parantu jar te 4 khun kashe zale he sangitale asate tar anakhi interest aala asata.Yawar ekhadi serial banavali ahe ka.

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  48. khupach chan aahe. kahitari navin
    vachlyasarakhe vatat aahe.
    khup khup aavdali.
    manisha.

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  49. Ekdam mast, mazyakade shabda nahit.
    tari lekhakache purna nav kalale tar bare hoil.

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  50. Too Good Story.....
    Anthony la ajun vait padhhatini marayla hava hota....

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  51. Lihave tevhade shabd kamich ahet ya kathesathi.........soliddddd ekadam.....

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  52. Khup chan, jar changlya director javal pohachali tar ek changla supence movie pahayla milu shakto.

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  53. Hi,i am swati gangdhar
    he kadambari khup khup awadli egarlly waiting for next novel. actually mala kadmbari vachan awdacha nahi pan hi kanbari vachlyawar maza interest khoopach wadhal aahe

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  54. superb, atishay sundar kadambari ahe...

    Shunya suddha atishay chhan ahe.

    Pudhil kadmabrichi wat baghat ahe.....

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  55. मी जास्त वाचत नाही.. पण ह्या कादंबरीने मला जकडून ठेवले होते. खरच खुपच अद्-भूत अशी कादंबरी आहे. तुमच्या पुढील लेखनासाठी शुभेच्छा. व तुम्ही ही कादंबरी मोठ्या मनाने माझ्या सारख्या सर्व रसिकांना ऑनलाईन वाचावयास दिल्याबद्दल आपला शतशः आभारी आहे...

    अरुणकिशन उर्फ राहुल रणसुभे...
    rahulkransubhe@gmail.com

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  56. kharach,asaa shevat hoil asa vatal navata,khupach interesting hoti ani agdi ekhada chapter sampala na ki pudhe hi kahani kay valan ghete yachi uschukta .....
    mala khup avadali........
    thanks


    sameeksha

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  57. Sunil
    Very nice .....
    Tumachya hatat Saraswati aahe.
    Likhan asach suru theva. Saraswatichya aashirwadane tumchya kade laxmi pan yevu det.

    Runika

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  58. mi pahilyandach kuthali katha vachali khupach chhan ashi trilling
    keep it up

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  59. nice one........i like it

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  60. Khupach chan aahe... Purna vachali , ashach changalya katha lihit raha,
    Tumhala shubhechcha !

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  61. khupach chan aahe. kahitari navin
    vachlyasarakhe vatat aahe.
    so good

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  62. thank you very much for a very very great, suspense, fantastic,best novel.

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  63. chaan ahe suspense story

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  64. Hello
    Atishaya Chan Aahe hi kadambari.
    All the best.take care and
    Thanks.

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  65. Its really a nice novel. kharach khup chan ekdam story change tyamule intrest vatato ani ti shevti nancy ahe he kalun tar ajun chan vatat mail manje ki ekda start kelyavar end kay ahe yachi utsukta rahte, kharch chan ahe, suspance chan ahe.

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  66. Its really a nice novel. kharach khup chan ekdam story change tyamule intrest vatato ani ti shevti nancy ahe he kalun tar ajun chan vatat mail manje ki ekda start kelyavar end kay ahe yachi utsukta rahte, kharch chan ahe, suspance chan ahe.

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  67. "Jai Maharashtra" Sunilji.
    Novel khupach chan aahe,khar sangayach tar hi novel vachatana bhiti vatat hoti aani pratyek chitra dolyasamor yet hot.

    Wish you all the best for next novel.
    Sangam Belure.

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  68. khupach chan rangavli ahe katha. Ekda vachayla ghetli ki sodavi vatatach nahi. Zakaaaas.....

    Vaaranwaar vachavi ashi....

    Yogesh and Kiran

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  69. hiiii,i m Harshada
    Khupach chan hoti kadambari tumachya dusarya kadambary SHUNYA & BLACKWHOLE khupach chan hotya ani ho tumchi latest syberlove kadambari pan khup interesting ahe.
    keep it up with writing....
    Thank you.

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  70. hi
    very interesting story.

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  71. Sahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

    majja ali

    Vaishali....

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  72. Khupach interesting novel aahe. Pahilyapasun shevatparyant utkantha tanun dharali hoti.Pharach maja aali wachtana.

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  73. kai sangu samjatach nahi ahe... chan uttam.... manapasun dad ya lekhnala... khupach chhan...great...god bless you

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  74. its really interesting story!!!
    Shevatparyanta utsukata tanun dharanari!!!
    pradnya

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  75. JABARDAST UTKANTH WARDHAK NOVEL.......FROM START TO END....

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  76. Sundar katha.....
    Aavadli aaplya...

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  77. Its too good and nice novel,i want to tell one thing here if ur really love someone then dont ever think bad againt's him or her

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  78. Khupch Chhan Navel Ahe Shewat Khup Chaan Hota

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  79. Khup Chaan Novel Aahe Ani naveen Novel chi vat pahat aahe

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  81. Hi Sunil,

    Your novel is very interesting and i like it very much.

    Best of luck for your next novel.

    Archana

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  82. Thanks alot for such a wonderful novel.... Far chan.... Mast maja ali wachtana... Asha stories lihin continue kar... Plz...

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  83. Khup Sunder , maza kade shabdach nahit khup chann sunil, keep it up

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  84. Excellent....Khup must aahe novel

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  85. far interesting kahani hoti.
    mala far aawadli.pan hya peksha jast horrer kahani pan liha.
    Keep it up.

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  86. far interesting kahani hoti.
    mala far aawadali pan hya peksha aankhin horrer kahani pan liha.
    Keep it up.

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  87. तुमची कादांबरी एकदम मस्त होती. पण याचा शेवट जर Realastic असता तर अजुन मजा आली असती

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  88. This novel is a very good novel. Very very interesting novel.

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  89. खूपच छान...स्तुती करण्यास शब्द अपुरे आहेत...
    वाचताना सर्व घटना डोळ्यांसमोर उभी राहत होती ...


    रुपेश डबीर.....

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  90. good suspense horror as well as thriller.

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  91. bhari novel aahe.katech yetat vachun angavr..
    keep it up sunil sir

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  92. This novel is very very good.

    I very like that.

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  93. Very interesting. Suspense is keeped very well. Just congradulations. Keep writing these kinds of stories.

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  94. verryyyyyyyy good novel..........

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  95. HI!!!

    ITS A NICE NOVEL.....THANKS FOR GIVING US A NICE LITRATURE! BUT DON MIND ONE SUGGESTION....U DIDN'T EXPLAIN HOW WAS THE CAT KILLED ALL THOSE CRIMINALS....IT COULD B ADD MORE HORROR AS I THINK...WELL... IT WAS NICE! :)

    MAST RE-SATISH!

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  96. Avadali Kadambari,
    Vegvan, laksh khilaun thevnari, ani mast. Officech kam bajulach rahil.

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  97. fantastic .... ery good suspance

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  98. Ho mala adbhut katha avadali chan hoti ani tyatil suspense pan avadala complete 2 divas lagale vachayala but I enjoyed it

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  99. This is a very good treat to marathi people who are living outside India and don't have an easy access to Marathi Books. I loved your story. It was very interesting and heart touching novel. You have written it so well that while reading all the scenes starts appearing in front of the eyes as i am seeing the live movie. Very good writing ! Keep it up!! Thank you for such a good book.

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  100. Hellow Sunil

    Ekdam mast kadambari ahe. suruwaat kelyananater pudhe pudhe jaychi utsukta lagleli asaychi.khupach chhan vatali suspence storey navin navin valne ghet ani utkantha vadhvnari.

    Dhnyawaad ani Manapasun abhar.

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  101. mi pahilyandach kuthali katha vachali khupach chhan ashi trilling
    keep it up


    Thanks for such wonderful writings...

    ping2sagar@gmail.com

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  102. this is really good one.. you should plan making movie out of it... will be a good hit...

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  103. khup chan story aahe......kahup interesting novel aahe...cinemachya story peksha pan khup mast story hoti..thiril pan khup hoti...i like it...
    ajun ahi new novel chi wait karat aahe.........

    (amruta mujumdar)

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  104. ekadam masat story ahe
    kharach khup chan

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  105. khup mast ase vatle ki kuthala tari picture baghitala

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  106. Katha farach chaan hoti...eka cinema chi story pan hou shakel.

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  107. Start to end the novel is vwry good. I had read it one day. Wish you all te best. Nice thikig.

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  108. Hi Sunil,

    WONDERFUL...

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  109. hi sunil ji

    the novel its was great .wating 4 next horror novel

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  110. khupa khup chan aahe story.........
    interesting, amizing,
    waiting for next novel

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  111. Novel is gud to hold the suspense till d end.......i like it

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  112. Khupch chan lihile ahe pustak. Mi ekada wachayala chalu kele te purn sampalyawarch thambale. Atishay chan warnan kele ahe ani jashya chay tashya goshti dolyasamor ubhya rahatat. Keep it up. Ashich pustake amhala wachayala miludet....
    Archana Borotikar

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  113. खूपच सुंदर लिहिली आहे हि कथा.
    सुरुवात केल्यावर संपेपर्यंत एक मिनिट हि न थांबता वाचली..
    उत्तम शैली आहे तुमची
    पुढील लिखाणासाठी शुभेच्छा !
    शून्य आणि हि, दोन्ही कादंबरी साठी Thanks a Lot!
    I enjoyed a lot!

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  114. Apratim katha aahe . aani very interesting.

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  115. Really nice novel..
    very interesting one..!
    and also feels nice to read Marathi Novels Out of India.. coz here we cant get Marathi books at all..!
    Thanx for the same Sunil..!!
    -PRK

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  116. khoop chan aahe.keep it up....

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  117. khoop Chan aahe.keep it up....

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  118. thanks a lot for a excellent novel. :)

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  119. really excellent novel :)

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  120. katha ekdam chan aahe

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  121. Very very interesting novel..

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  122. Very very interesting novel..

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  123. far chhan aahe ashich suspence aajun ek suru kara

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  124. far chhan aahe ashich suspence aajun ek suru kara

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  125. Chhan ahe...

    End thodasa hindi movies sarakha watala.

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  126. Star to end khup chan vatli.
    Interesting ani vachtana samor tasech chitra ubhe rahate.

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  127. khup khup mast khup mast kalpana ahe laiiiiiiiiii bhariiiiiii
    ****maze ek suggestion ahe ki tumhi yahcyvarati ek supense film tayar hou sahkate.....*** khup mast ashi film hoil marathi madhun kadavi hich icha jari kadalit tar...

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  128. khupch chan .agdi adbhutch hoti katha.

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  129. Excellant Novel. Mala Khupach Aavadli.

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  130. खूपच सुंदर लिहिली आहे हि कथा.
    पुढील लिखाणासाठी शुभेच्छा !

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  131. Khupach interesting novel aahe. Vachatana eka thikani jakhadun thevanar aahe.

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  132. स्टोरी तर खुपच छान होती त्याचे कोणत्या शब्दात वर्णन करू तेच कळत नाहीये.

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  133. It's a very Excellent Storie
    Pudchi Storie Kai asel?

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  134. he novel khupach chan ahe mala
    khupach avdale
    kharach story sobat prasang dolyapudhe disat hota
    it's very suspence ani khupach chan

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  135. yes sir its really good novel...
    i forward this url to my all friend... thanks

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  136. very very interesting..
    Khupach chhan....

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  137. chan story hoti .nice 1 all the best

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  138. farch chan suspense kadambari ahe.
    baryach divsani aschi kadambari vachli.

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  139. Khup chhan

    Pan Mala Ramchandra Sadekarachi "Nirabhra" kadambri vachayala milel ka?

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  140. Good, keep-it-up, waiting for next ...
    Pankaj

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  141. khupch sundar,
    kadachit shabadat sangane kathinch.pan pratyek chapter chya velela mazya angavar kate yet hote.pan mala nancey che khup vait vatale.
    kharach ekhadya mulivar jewa asa prasang ghadun tyache jiv jatat tewa tya gunegharala tya atmyane ashich shishka dili pahije manaje jenekarun puthe asa prasang kontyahi mulichya aaushyat yenar nahi.

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  142. khupach sundar...
    sangayala shabd apure padtat.

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  143. Hey nice suspense thrilling story, khupch chaan waiting for love stories

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  144. Khup chan ashu katha aahe.....Khup Khup aavdali.....
    ajunhi ashya katha astil tar tya ekade taka.......manje aamhalavachata yetil.....

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  145. hats off to u.khupach chan yala mnantat kalpanashakti.why dont u make film on it? thanks

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  146. Its really a nice novel

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  147. khupach chan. kathechi mandani changli hoti aani suspense tar mala khupach aavadala. ek chagla picture banvata yeu shakto.

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  148. IT'S REALLY REALLY NOT ONLY GOOD, IT'S A BEST. I LIKE IT.

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  149. Khupach Chan.cinema chi story pan hou shakel.Eagarly waiting for Sunil's next novel.


    VINOD

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  150. khup chan ekda vachyela ghetele ki purne zalya sivaye soduche shakete nahi.its really intersting.

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  151. atishay SUNDAR!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  152. ATISHAY SUNDAR!!!!!!!!!

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  153. Must ekdum khoop maja aali vachatana, mi hi 1st time kadambari vachali aahe aani mazi survatach khoop chhan zalyamule mala aata vachanachi khoop aavad nirman zali aahe. Hyapudhe mi nakki vachene chalu theven evhade nakki.

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  154. Hi,

    Really a wonderful story, u r really perfect writer, who can create scene in front of eyes while reading :)

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  155. Kadambari shevatachya kshnaparyant khilvun taknari ahe dhnyavad itaki sundar kalakruti prastut kelyabaddal

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  156. Apratim. Kadhabari Khupach rahassmay aahe. Utkhatha vadhavanari ahe

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  157. lay chan chan ahe he tumchi stori asich chan chan rahiisy bhary kandambary amhala vachvat ja ........pan tumchi hi kandambari amhala phar avadli...............................

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  158. this is ekdam mast.....! plz give me this font for download.

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  159. thanks for providing such good novel. i really enjoyed it.

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  160. Khupach Sunder

    Really Wonderful Novel....

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  161. i want t meet writer of this story.
    it is exellent.
    i cant beleive how anyone can imagine this story.

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  162. amezing story, wonderful
    i like it very much, and what a suspense creation is also interesting.
    we all thankful to you for making such wonderful novel.

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  163. khup khup khup chan story hoti. wachtana ase feel hot hote ki je kahi wachat aahot te sagle aaplya dolyasamor disat aahe.like ekhada movie baghat aahe me. ekdum mast novel. thank u. all the best.

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  164. Khupach mast kalpana shakti ahe. ek suggetion Bhutacha thoda part cut karun CID la ek chan story milu shakate so try for it.

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  165. really fantastic .but because of heading and clicking newer post continuity loose some time.

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  166. Khup Chan Very Good Next Novels

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  167. Mast, English movie pahat aahe ase vatale

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  168. Khupach thriller. very nice.

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  169. khupach chaan ahye .... grt wrk...

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  170. Best......... no other words

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  171. superb one.....thanx for such wonderful novels.I hav read both "Shoonya" and "Ad-bhut".Both r just amazing.Donhi stories madhil varnan khupach chhan aahe.i liked ad-bhut vry much coz effects r too real dat i can imagine complete situation in my mind.
    kharach khup chhan lihita aapan...eagerly waiting for next novel n wish u best luck for ur work..

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  172. Excellent, No words to say something. Nice keep it up !!!

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  173. khupch chan... vaadch nahi...

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  174. Kup Chan Ahe Kadambarui.I like very much.Yalach Nay Manatat godacha

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  175. novel khup mast hoti...
    pan mala kalal naahi te he ki tya hotel madhun nancy chi dead body kuthe aani kasi geli....

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  176. This is another your best novel.I really like it.
    Best luck.Thambu naka.lihit raha.

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  177. must aahe novels...maja ali .........superb...excellentsir excellent....mi kadhi aivdha 1 jagi basun vachat nahi pan ...tumchyamule mi he karu shaklo...jabardust

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  178. sahi kadambari ahe yar................thaks to writer..........Jitendra C.

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  179. Thank you marathi novels.net
    Khup khup Aad-bhut Ani Kharech kup sunder katha dilyabaddal apale aabhari aahot ! Dhanyavaad !

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  180. nice 1 dude
    good suspense
    like it
    keep it up
    greets to you for yours new stories

    .......Vinnitro

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  181. yapeksha jabardast ani thrill kahich asu shakat nahi

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